I remember
the day we decided to go far south
far
far
south
south of the mainland
south
to
an island
we found a piece of
valley paradise
by a river
hugged
by mountains
our island legs were not too steady
do you remember one icy morning
when your boots leaked
with ice
and in the near distance
you saw
your first tiger snake?
that ice saved you from moving too fast
and
do you remember
when we decided to have some music in the gardens
we bought a large tent with a fancy fringe
hired a quintet
and sent out invitations
to everyone
any one
and hardly a soul replied
then
the night before
the day of island days
it rained
rain turned into
a wild early morning thunderstorm
sleep eluded us
but
next morning
the sun glowed
the garden glowed
and colourful cars
a tribe of
colourful cars
carefully meandered up
our muddy driveway
our home was humble
with a home-made feel
but our views were grand
our lake
fringed with magical spruce
danced with Merlin
our platypus
Dry's Bluff
rang with sunset colour
our mini rainforest
spun Celtic questions
do you remember
why it was
we wandered
away?
Linking to:
Magpie Tales #284
9 comments:
True, the prompt "rang with sunset colour." Well done.
This is an immensely satisfying write ...
The picture and your words in perfect harmony, a wonderfully descriptive piece.
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Hazards of following the Piper
we found a piece of
valley paradise by a
river hugged by mountains
There is a lot of goodness that one may discover but often not taken care of. These opportunities just fizzle off. Wonderful take Gemma!
Hank
nice events!
The simple...beautiful things. Why DO we wander away? Why?
sometimes wandering away is real fun! nice :)
You have described the happenings beautifully. Very vivid :-)
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